The effect is very good, but the writing is so overcomplicated and long-winded that I actually fell
asleep trying to read it.
Marvin Kaye
Author, "The Handbook of Mental Magic"
Hi Marvin,
Drew here. First off, thank you for taking a look at this - sincerely.
I find your comment somewhat confusing though because this manuscript isn't about any particular "effect" but rather two different playing card stacks.
Regarding the "overcomplicated and long-winded" writing all I can say is that I will always err on the side of comprehensive over sparse explanations. I am thorough because I want everyone to grasp the nuances of the systems.
Feel free to reach out to me if you have any questions on the content - my contact information is in the PDF.
Best wishes,
Drew