First of all, this is a great concept and lends itself to some powerful moments if you play it
right. The spectator makes all the choices yet ends up on an exact time in an exact place from
numbers they created on invisible dice. If you are a good storyteller, you can really build on this.
Unfortunately, there are downsides. First, one of the outs on the printed tickets doesn't
work. It needed to be the number BEFORE the chosen number, but they made it the number after, which
makes it impossible to hit the ticket. That means you'll have the ticket seat kicker only if they
hit the number perfectly, rather than any wiggle room.
Second, three of the locations are
perfect, but one of the locations will mean absolutely nothing to 99% of the people you perform this
for in America. They will have never heard of this place before and have no idea what to visualize.
Unfortunately, you can't substitute this in any way, so if they land on this place your only hope to
pull off the picture part is to have them Google it because they will have never heard of it if they
aren't from Europe. As an alternative, you can skip the picture revelation and just go straight to
the ticket prediction.
The watch is good but unfortunately has a second hand on it. That
means you can't just let the battery die and keep using it. It also means using it live will force
you to do a little mental calculation to get the prediction time to hit perfectly. Sometimes you may
end up close but not on it, though the spectator will probably still see it as a hit. Or just
replace the watch with a non-functioning one without a second hand, and it'll still work for the
routine.
Finally, you need two identical paperclips but they only include one. While this
isn't necessarily a deal-killer, it's a special color and size that you won't easily replace. You
can use regular paper clips, but the coating on theirs protects your props so you'd do well to do
some searching online.
The project is good but just needed a few tweaks before going out.
You are given two sets of prediction tickets, but I wish you'd be given some blank areas to write
your own predictions on. You can scratch out the wrong numbers and right the correct ones on there,
but it'll be obvious you did.
You can perform this as it is, and you'll probably get great
reactions most of the time. If you tie this into a great story, you'll have a great routine.
First: There is no mistake in the numbering on the tickets. The SEAT number works for a hit in one case, the GATE number works for a hit in the alternate case. But the two numbers do have to be a direct hit, otherwise, just show the ticket and cover the numbers. It's still great. (I don't want to give away too much with the specifics, just know it is not a mistake or misprint in the tickets.)
Second: As far as a location being unknown, if they do not know where it is, have them look it up on their smart phone. No, I did not know where it was, but how many people travel without their smart phone?!