Magic Tricks

I love the routines in this book.
However, I'll give one example of some wording/patter
that could be greatly improved.

The way Jermay scripts Touching on Hoy,
you would probably not want to do this TOH,
and also PK Touch, in the same act.

This is because,
amazingly, Jermay uses the same wording
you would use in PKT (which makes sense in PKT)
in this routine (which is unnatural and makes no sense in TOH).
Not only does the wording sound very weird,
but I think it risks exposing the DR.

I have changed the wording from,
"I'd like the person who felt me touch them to think of..."
or "If you felt me touch you just now, think of..."
to:
"I'd like you, the one I just touched, to think of..."

There's probably even a more natural way of saying it.