NO WONDER WHY I SEE THIS A LOT IN OPEN BOX ,I AM NOT A KID AND BEEN DOING MAGIC FOUR FIVE YEARS AND
I HAVE A BIG TOOL BOX OF TRICKS ,BUT THE ROUTE-AN IN THIS IS TEAR ABLE ON CAMERA YOU CAN HIDE ANGLES
BUT DOING THIS LIVE IN FRONT OF FRIENDS THERE IS NO WAY TO DO THIS WHAT OUT LOOKING LIKE YOU ARE
HIDING SOMETHING ,I HATE THIS
Hi Jeffrey, I'd like to give you a small amount of feedback, and I hope you will accept it in the spirit in which it is offered. I am genuinely hoping to help you.
First, please do not post in all-caps. Doing so implies that you are shouting, and it is harder to read than using using a mix of uppercase and lowercase letters.
Second, if English is not your first language, then please "don't worry about" what I am about to say. However, if English is your first language, then I implore you to please proofread your posts before you submit them. Try to use standard spelling, punctuation, and grammar. Your posts will come across much better if you do, and they will be easier to read.
For example, your post is written as one long run-on sentence. Instead of just adding in a few commas, divide your ideas into complete sentences using periods. Commas are still your friends, though, so I recommend that you not abandon using commas. Just use commas within multiple complete sentences. Also, you wrote: "BUT THE ROUTE-AN IN THIS IS TEAR ABLE . . ." I think you meant to write something like this: "But, the routine is terrible." You wrote "LUCY" instead of "Lucky," and "WHAT OUT" when you meant to write "without." I think it is likely that you would have caught these errors if you would have reread your post one more time.
My final comment is that I do appreciate your taking the time to give your feedback on the trick. I appreciate your honest opinion, and I appreciate your trying to help other magicians to make a wise buying decision.
Peace!
LUCY I BOUGHT THIS OPEN BOX
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